|Reviews for My Haiku Collection|
| Walter Alan 2/7/09 . chapter 1
Much too... straightforward. The whole purpose of haiku is to be obscure and make people think. All of these explain exactly what you are implying, making reading them horribly dull.
| YasuRan 2/5/09 . chapter 23
Can't really pick a favorite, I loved all of them :D. Keep up the great work!
| Carmel March 9/14/08 . chapter 21
Pretty, pretty, pretty :)
| eine.hexe 7/21/08 . chapter 8
I like this one very much, I think you've sketched the theme (Music) smoothly and nicely. Good job :)
| 403 Forbidden 7/20/08 . chapter 2
This could use some more description. Also, the ending could be stronger and sum the poem up. Shameless plug: review marothon (link in profile)!
| 403 Forbidden 7/20/08 . chapter 1
I think this could use some punctuation and depth. I like the suspense because it is interesting. Shameless plug:review marathon, link in profile!
| Counting Petals 7/20/08 . chapter 2
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This seemed to have a soothing quality to me, mostly evoked by the words "gentle" and "soft" in the first line, which made me like this. I also liked the image of a summer day, because even when it's not summer this haiku could remind you of how it's supposed to feel. Nicely done! )
| Carmel March 3/10/08 . chapter 17
Very pretty :)
| Carmel March 12/5/07 . chapter 16
Beautiful. Makes me want to go out and build snowmen :D
| windy girl 11/20/07 . chapter 2
I like this. It feels like this almost everyday during the spring and summer season, but no shade for me. That's what I get for living in a desert... Nice.
| andthevineswillfollow 11/19/07 . chapter 16
Pretty cool ;)
| Carmel March 11/11/07 . chapter 15
Superwonderful :) I love it!
| I Quoth Nevermore 11/1/07 . chapter 15
yay! Happy Halloween. Great haiku. Love it.
| just dani 10/25/07 . chapter 14
oh, i really like these
their rather calming...
i especially liked "his eyes", "impatient", and "sandpiper"
i can really relate to the first two, and i just
love the imagery in "sandpiper".
| I Quoth Nevermore 10/25/07 . chapter 14
Did you do this one over? I don't remember what it was before, but I like it now. Good job. _