Reviews for My Haiku Collection
Walter Alan 2/7/09 . chapter 1
Much too... straightforward. The whole purpose of haiku is to be obscure and make people think. All of these explain exactly what you are implying, making reading them horribly dull.
YasuRan 2/5/09 . chapter 23
Can't really pick a favorite, I loved all of them :D. Keep up the great work!
Carmel March 9/14/08 . chapter 21
Pretty, pretty, pretty :)
eine.hexe 7/21/08 . chapter 8
I like this one very much, I think you've sketched the theme (Music) smoothly and nicely. Good job :)
403 Forbidden 7/20/08 . chapter 2
This could use some more description. Also, the ending could be stronger and sum the poem up. Shameless plug: review marothon (link in profile)!
403 Forbidden 7/20/08 . chapter 1
I think this could use some punctuation and depth. I like the suspense because it is interesting. Shameless plug:review marathon, link in profile!
Counting Petals 7/20/08 . chapter 2
Review Marathon! (If you're confused, there's a link on my profile.)

This seemed to have a soothing quality to me, mostly evoked by the words "gentle" and "soft" in the first line, which made me like this. I also liked the image of a summer day, because even when it's not summer this haiku could remind you of how it's supposed to feel. Nicely done! )
Carmel March 3/10/08 . chapter 17
Very pretty :)
Carmel March 12/5/07 . chapter 16
Beautiful. Makes me want to go out and build snowmen :D

Carm
windy girl 11/20/07 . chapter 2
I like this. It feels like this almost everyday during the spring and summer season, but no shade for me. That's what I get for living in a desert... Nice.

-pb
andthevineswillfollow 11/19/07 . chapter 16
Pretty cool ;)
Carmel March 11/11/07 . chapter 15
Superwonderful :) I love it!

Carm
I Quoth Nevermore 11/1/07 . chapter 15
yay! Happy Halloween. Great haiku. Love it.
just dani 10/25/07 . chapter 14
oh, i really like these

their rather calming...

i especially liked "his eyes", "impatient", and "sandpiper"

i can really relate to the first two, and i just

love the imagery in "sandpiper".

:]
I Quoth Nevermore 10/25/07 . chapter 14
Did you do this one over? I don't remember what it was before, but I like it now. Good job. _
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