Much too... straightforward. The whole purpose of haiku is to be obscure and make people think. All of these explain exactly what you are implying, making reading them horribly dull.

Can't really pick a favorite, I loved all of them :D. Keep up the great work!

Pretty, pretty, pretty :)

I like this one very much, I think you've sketched the theme (Music) smoothly and nicely. Good job :)

This could use some more description. Also, the ending could be stronger and sum the poem up. Shameless plug: review marothon (link in profile)!

I think this could use some punctuation and depth. I like the suspense because it is interesting. Shameless plug:review marathon, link in profile!

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This seemed to have a soothing quality to me, mostly evoked by the words "gentle" and "soft" in the first line, which made me like this. I also liked the image of a summer day, because even when it's not summer this haiku could remind you of how it's supposed to feel. Nicely done! )

Very pretty :)

Beautiful. Makes me want to go out and build snowmen :D

Carm

I like this. It feels like this almost everyday during the spring and summer season, but no shade for me. That's what I get for living in a desert... Nice.

-pb

Pretty cool ;)

Superwonderful :) I love it!

Carm

yay! Happy Halloween. Great haiku. Love it.

oh, i really like these

their rather calming...

i especially liked "his eyes", "impatient", and "sandpiper"

i can really relate to the first two, and i just

love the imagery in "sandpiper".

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Did you do this one over? I don't remember what it was before, but I like it now. Good job. _