 Walter Alan 2009-02-07 . chapter 1Much too... straightforward. The whole purpose of haiku is to be obscure and make people think. All of these explain exactly what you are implying, making reading them horribly dull. |
 YasuRan 2009-02-05 . chapter 23Can't really pick a favorite, I loved all of them :D. Keep up the great work! |
 Carmel March 2008-09-14 . chapter 21Pretty, pretty, pretty :) |
 eine.hexe 2008-07-21 . chapter 8I like this one very much, I think you've sketched the theme (Music) smoothly and nicely. Good job :) |
 403 Forbidden 2008-07-20 . chapter 2This could use some more description. Also, the ending could be stronger and sum the poem up. Shameless plug: review marothon (link in profile)! |
 403 Forbidden 2008-07-20 . chapter 1I think this could use some punctuation and depth. I like the suspense because it is interesting. Shameless plug:review marathon, link in profile! |
 Counting Petals 2008-07-20 . chapter 2Review Marathon! (If you're confused, there's a link on my profile.)
This seemed to have a soothing quality to me, mostly evoked by the words "gentle" and "soft" in the first line, which made me like this. I also liked the image of a summer day, because even when it's not summer this haiku could remind you of how it's supposed to feel. Nicely done! =) |
 Carmel March 2008-03-10 . chapter 17Very pretty :) |
 Carmel March 2007-12-05 . chapter 16Beautiful. Makes me want to go out and build snowmen :D
~Carm~ |
 windy girl 2007-11-20 . chapter 2I like this. It feels like this almost everyday during the spring and summer season, but no shade for me. That's what I get for living in a desert... Nice.
-pb |
 andthevineswillfollow 2007-11-19 . chapter 16Pretty cool ;) |
 Carmel March 2007-11-11 . chapter 15Superwonderful :) I love it!
~Carm~ |
 I Quoth Nevermore 2007-11-01 . chapter 15yay! Happy Halloween. Great haiku. Love it. |
 just dani 2007-10-25 . chapter 14oh, i really like these
their rather calming...
i especially liked "his eyes", "impatient", and "sandpiper"
i can really relate to the first two, and i just
love the imagery in "sandpiper".
:] |
 I Quoth Nevermore 2007-10-25 . chapter 14Did you do this one over? I don't remember what it was before, but I like it now. Good job. ^_^ |