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| Twilight Starr 2007-11-03 ch 1,  | abuseGreat poem. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Gemma Lovell 2007-10-16 ch 1, | abuseReally interesting; I like it plenty. However, I think that the last 2 lines of verse 2 are just okay. I thought the line "and someone died" seemed strangely impersonal in a poem that the writer seems very passionate and connected to. Good job!! Love, Gem |