 Daisy 2007-08-21 . chapter 1I loved this. It is beautifully written. The contradiction between Angels and devils fit perfectly into the difference between the mask that we wear and who we truly are. I found the line ‘And too little do we live up to what we may outwardly seem’ truly beautiful. Every phrase has been perfectly sewn together to create something touching and though provoking. I found the last half of the poem inspiring and uplifting. I just wish it would be a little longer… another stanza or so… |