Wow. I wish this was a published monologue so I could use it for n audition. You have some serious skills!

Aww. That was really good, I like the reoccuring themes of tea and rain. "She always said that you should never drink tea alone." I also like the mystery of it, how Rupert never says who "she" is: what her name is, how he knew her, ect. I like how, in memory of this person, he was drinking tea, alone, even though he didn't like tea and had only ever drank it for her.

Since this was written for a class, I can understand why it's so short. Still, I think that you might like to expand it a little, make it a little longer. It's good the way it is, but I think you can do more, if you choose to. If not, it's a great standalone piece.

Keep writing,

-Freak

as if he tries to evade the pain 'cause of losing "her", the monologue sounds sad but ironic at the same time. it's really an interesting play.

You've created an excellent sense of true grief. It's a bit short, but entertaining.

Livi

Oh. So sad...and yet quite lovely. My school has One-Acts every year, and between each play there's a monologue...this just kind of reminded me of that...because I think this is the kind of thing someone would do for a monologue...it's really beautiful.

This is just.. perfect. Tragic & beautiful.

I love this. I love the bittersweet tinge added to this play. I love the fact that very little is explicitly stated, yet you get to feel very connected to Rupert.

This is an excellent piece.