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| tearing hands 2007-08-04 ch 1,  | abuseI love how your poems are so short but have such an impact. I like the line breaks and "gold plated / Ears." |
| aa-Moss 2007-08-03 ch 1, | abuseah, just amazing. So few short poems seem to deliver a very powerful impact (at least for me), but this one definitely does. You have a knack for line breaks, I think. very nice. |
| Aislin Kane 2007-08-03 ch 1, | abuseoh...great job!...I love the power of such few lines |