FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Moondog Dozier 2007-08-03 ch 1,  | abuseThe specifics work well to create the portrait of the scene. I like how this is non-individualized, like it could be anyone rather than a specific person. Very vivid, and yet conceptually universal. Well written work. |
| Crafty Butcher 2007-08-03 ch 1, | abuseG'job. Sounds almost like the feet play some role in attracting mates. If only, :) |