Reviews for Sweet Little Lies

Reviews For: Sweet Little Lies - Reviews: Page 1 of 17

Entice 2008-08-30 ch 22,	abuseYes! go get your man!...wait...he's my man!! bsck away from the hottie, **!
insanity-ward 2008-08-27 ch 22,	abuseoo! wicked awesome story!! luved it! totally aweosme! and i absoltuely luv Jack!! she is so freakin hilarious! and random! which makes it even better! and im really glad to see that Jack and Toby are going to make it. and the thing about the gym. hilarious. i think Jack has inspired me. =D she's so way totally cool! you dip Will, how can you not like her! and i also luv your writing style and the way you describe Jack. update soon! =]
The Mango Tango 2008-08-27 ch 2,	abuseuhh quick question... is jack a guy or a girl?? because this is realyy confusing or is jack jsut bi ...
GrannyP 2008-08-27 ch 22,	abuseOh man! Will is such a pill! Jeez. I don't like him. He only dated Jack to upset Toby and to make Vic jealous? Or make both of them jealous? That is just messed up. He was horrible to Jack. She should have kicked a ball into his head. Or kicked a head into his ball. Something like that. And I love how she took everything he said and made it into something literal instead of figurative. Well, keep writing!
CrossMyHeart 2008-08-27 ch 22,	abuseoh!! i'm excited for the next chapter! Post it soon? XxCrossMyHeartxX
help911x711 2008-08-27 ch 22,	abuse=O poor poor cookie I cnt wait for the next chapt and see ACTION =D I love action and Toby in it will make my day ;D
Camelia Sinensis 2008-08-27 ch 22,	abuseWell this was little boring, I mean, nothing actually happened (although I am very sorry for the poor little soggy cookie). Can't wait to read the next chapter, though. Hope Toby will show up. ;) Cheers!
Twist Their Emotions 2008-08-27 ch 22,	abuseCute.
Piratesfanatic 2008-08-23 ch 4,	abuseLol, I love your story! It's so funny and interesting to read. :) Sorry I haven't been reviewing! I haven't had a chance to read your story in so long, I'm almost done reading now, but I love it! :D
Entice 2008-08-22 ch 21,	abuseas i was reading this chapter i realised that i hadn't left an anoyingly long, scaring review in a long time! and i though to myself: " Well now, that's just selfish. you must share your extremely disturbing thoughts with the world;)" and so here it is. well of course your attractive and toned, you foolish man! Why else would i have a shrine for you?!...um. well...it's not really strange, persay...to have a shrine for an imaginary character...NOT THAT I DO...but...if i did, it wouldn't...i mean geez, you have friggin' shoulder freckles! What's a girl to do?! I DON'T OBSESS! ...i think intensely. you could lean in my doorway anytime toby wink wink...no seriously. i've decided to post a list of all the pick up lines i would use to make toby fall in love with me...this is going to be tedious. ready?? kay, here goes: Was that love at first sight, toby, or should i walk past you again? I forgot my phone number, can I have yours? Excuse me could you give me directions? To where you ask?...To your heart. and this sure-fire list goes on and on. it's kinda sad actually...well no, it's really sad, but i know like hundreds of these. this is my favorite but it's for a guy so i can't use it on toby...obviously: "Hey, baby, Let's do some math. Add you and me together, subtract our clothes, divide your legs, and multiply." haha, so funny.
happy ever afterxx 2008-08-14 ch 21,	abuseI liked the update :) and I wish I could help you with the beta reader but I am currently in need of one myself :( in fact, if you manage to find a temp, can they beta read for me when your other beta reader comes back? Anyways, I wonder what you're thinking of for a sequel. More soon? x
writingisforthesoul 2008-08-13 ch 2,	abusei luv it
Jayjack 2008-08-12 ch 21,	abusehmm. how many times is she going to push him away. seriously i just want him to get over her and move on with life because this is not getting him anywhere. ** this. if i was him i'd leave i'd be done with her. of course i'm not so we need to keep him wrapped around her finger yet she doesn't even know it. ugh. update when possible.
Camelia Sinensis 2008-08-12 ch 21,	abusewhat the hell? did this just happen or is my sick, sick mind playing jokes on me? (i'm actually not feeling too good!) argh! i loved it to bits, but NO way that happened. sequel?! oh yeah. i like the idea. Jack's so nice and weirdo. Loved her, but I loved Toby even more. Y'know, funny girl X tall, toned and tanned guy: tough choice. Not.
smudged lines 2008-08-11 ch 21,	abuseomg, just because it's late/early in the morning and i haven't gone to bed yet...this isn't the end? because i swear i saw the word sequel somewhere down the bottom. Jack needs her happy ending! heh. Okay, it's not the end. my bad- i went back and re-read the bottom note bit. but a sequel is a definite must, so please write it!! It'll be iteresting to have a story about Aimee. even with Jack's wandering thoughts, this was a serious chapter. i felt reall sad for the both of them at the end, and for once, i wasn't sighing at Jack for being so completely oblivious. sigh update soon. and now, i can crawl into bed. till next time (:

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