omg LMFAO i

quirky character! love it! enjoyed reading this!:D well done.:D

love love love the story! jack is frikin hilarious and toby is so gorgeous. didn't like the epilogue though. confused the hell out of me... sequel? and lol i only just figured out that the football you were talking about wasnt american football. i was like spherical? really? i'm a tad slow. but great job!

This is a great story!

HEY!
Poor Aimee :( Stupid Brand! Awesome jack and Toby! :D This story was so epic... more epic than 300 spartans taking on the Persian army even and tht sure was epic even by epic proportions! If tht makes any sense at all lol.
ANYWAY, I'm off to have a look at your other stories :D
Hope u have a gd week!
Virtual free food for u lol. or Jack and Aimee, whoever wants it more :P
BYE!!
x x x

replying out of obligation to the oath.

You're character is completely mental! I love her! :D

love the story!

"Calm down, calm down dear. It’s only a commercial."
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. Nice one. I remember that ad. ^^

This reminds me of a friend of mine called Scarlett.

Love you
xxIzzyxx

Alright, I'm gonna stop reading this story oh, right now. But I have a few things that I'm pretty sure need some mentioning..
Firstly, your summary sucks. I can't tell what you're trying to say because you're mixing up your he's and she's. Secondly, why would you name you're female character Jack? I wasn't sure if this was a slash story or a het story. Please, be normal and pick Lucy. And thirdly, if she isn't a lesbian, or bisexual, and seems to have NO common sense or idea what the hell she's doing, then what are you implying about you're character development? I'm so confused and it's only the second chapter. So lastly, what you're saying is that this girl isn't a lesbian, or bisexual, and neither is the chick she's trying to seduce, but I mean hey, why not? Why shouldn't she seduce some random chick and then suddenly fall madly in love with her ex-boyfriends older brother?

This story makes absolutely no sense. At least, from what I can see.

Okay, the story as a whole is cute, funny, and all around fun. :)
I don't like the epilogue. It's not really part of the story, it's a teaser for a different story. It takes the fun and twists it to end on a sad note. :( I understand plenty of authors do this, but I personally (as in, it's just -my- opinion) really, really dislike it, and feel like throwing that out there.

Very realistic, actually...I did this...

Well he's a bastard. On an entirely new level of shittiness.

Very nice first chapter. :)

Oh my gosh I love Jack and Toby so much. I really do want a sequel because I think we need more Jackish antics in the near future...but I'm a little worried that a Brandt-Aimee relationship story couldn't live up to Jack and Toby's. And to be honest reading the epilogue confused me at the beginning because Aimee's voice sounded so much like Jack's, until she started referring to Jack in the third person. But I think a sequel could still have serious potential.

wow great chapter, it was hilarious keep up the good work!