ha ha ha ha ha! i love it! u[pdate update update!

and add more Toby. PLEASE?

XxCrossMyHeartxX

OMG! Kissy with Vicki! I had forgotten all about that! Whoo! I thought it was hilarious when they were like, "Anything?" "No, nothing." It's kind of a relief, actually, because now Jack (maybe) will be able to get over Vicki and get on with Toby. Maybe. But it's Jack, so it's not likely to be that easy.

Now the big question is this: did Jack succeed in ruining Will? We shall soon see!

well at least she's not lesbian with Vic! i love her. Vic not Jack (she's so dense at times.) but a slight filler but funny. haha.

update when possible.

ok i like the story and it is very entertaining and all, but DUDE jack's stupidity is almost suffocating, i mean how can she not understand that toby likes her even after he practically yells it at her. i have never seen someone like jack, sorry but its not very realistic

I love it! Your characters are great and Jack entertains me. A lot. :)

Your story makes my life. This chapter is - if I had a word that combined adorable, funny, and witty, I would use it here.

I miss Toby.

You know that new song by Kate Perry: I kissed a Girl, that regrettably has a good beat, ergo, it's always gets stuck in your brain? Yeah . . . it was that cherry chapstick.

Cassandra

LMAO, Jack is truly something else. Love her.

"Well, Vic doesn’t either, but she does share my love for me, which you know, is cool."

LOL

Even Vic knows more about her crush on Toby than she does. And she acknowledges that he wants to jump her but doesn't seem to see past that, lol, she's so naive sometimes.

But great chapter, LOL at her for giving the kiss a do over since she was stunned, hahah.

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All I gotta say is that's it's been GREAT reading this and update soon!

Cassandra

I'm reviewing chapter eighteen on seventeen's box, which says sixteen because I didn't review the last chapter and am too lazy to scroll down to the bottom.

Pi/Pie is par of my catch phrase, which is. 'like pie.' And then if it doesn't make sense, because it was a neg comment and pie is so delicious, I add: the 3.14 kind. Because REALLY, who likes circles?

And I'm glad that Toby is bringing up the drunken confession. Psh! How can she NOT like him?

Cassandra

THREE YEARS! Yea . . . my head . . . not just a hatrack. I can add. One plus One equals two. Or so I learned.

Toby's pretty straight-forward, which I like. Games are a waste of time and can lead to somebody getting hurt. Or something.

Cassandra

Baileys. . . m . . . creamy. I've yet to discover the humor of Ole Gregg, but it's quite funny to repeat. Sometimes.

Cassan

You know, for a three-year relationship, Will is being very immature. And sure, she beat him up and all when he broke up with her, but surely he understands. There's no reason for him to be constantly sulking and hatin. Ya know?

BUTTS!

pretty eyeballs. That's rich.

Again, Jack is so dense that it's laughable.

Cassandra

In risk of sounding like a valley girl, Toby is like SO hot. _

Cassandra

p.s. Surely he doesn't REALLY believe her when she says she's gay. lol

something I forgot to mention in the previous chapter . . . didn't Jack already ask Toby for help with Vic. Technically. . . when she was drunk. Or did I just make that up in my head?

Jack does NOT need any sugar. Ever.

Funny plan by Aimee. I can't believe Toby asked her to call Will. tisk tisk.

Cassandra