Reviews for The Prince of Pain

The Dutchman 2007-08-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseSuperb Story...Reminds Me Of Something...Oh Well...Really Good Work...It's Even Better To Read On Drugs...Not That It Needs Drugs To Be Good...Because It's Fine Sober Too...But...What Was I Talking About...Man...I'm Gone
MantraMagazine 2007-08-05 ch 1,	abuseI loved it, albiet for the fact it needed a little more detail for my personal satisfaction the bareness could be considered challenging. And the lyrics were so rad, they fit the story flawlssly and even if they were not part of the story i would have enjoyed them.
concerto49 2007-08-04 ch 1,	abuseI saw the roman numeral division - felt you could have divided it using the chapters to make it less cluttered, more separate and better. The musical was rather cool. The introduction could have been a bit more interesting and memorable in terms of the very first few lines. Most people only read that before they turn. Could have done with more description. Some of the sentences needed rephrasing and revising. It was a touch rushy.