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| NightsDawn 2008-03-17 ch 2, | abuseI was smirking by the end of the first sentence of your first chapter. I like it already, can't wait for more. |
| Sebastian Osprey 2008-02-23 ch 2, | abuseDOOM I say! Hee, I love your title, and the wording really did make me laugh out loud (it bother me when people (usually myself) type "lol" even when they don't laugh, but here it's appropriate, along with lmao, rofl, and any combination thereof). Write more soon--I can't wait to see if Liam/Hotness can actually cook! |
| Victoria Watson 2008-01-16 ch 1, | abuseI love it! The tone is excellent. Your humor is awesome. I can't wait for an update! |
| Imalefty 2007-08-05 ch 1, | abusehahaha, this is what angst stories should REALLY be like. :P this is much better. i loved the whole "potter" thing... that was great. (so cliche...) but really, i can't criticize much. it's just as it should be... sarcastic, funny, etc. good job! -Lefty |
| Serom Kim 2007-08-04 ch 1, | abuseHahahaha ... that was funny! It was an interesting parody of the romance stories that I've browsed through at times when I had nothing better to do. For example, the fact that a beautiful outcast with few friends would have a boyfriend when they don't have a lot of friends in the first place. Argh, romance stories pull that all the time. This was a parody, so I can't complain much. First person, too, so if the character really thinks like that I can't complain either. No grammatical errors from what I could see ... great story! |