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| Twilight Starr 2007-11-03 ch 1,  | abuseLoneliness generally isn't want anyone wants. Great poem. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Gemma Lovell 2007-10-10 ch 1, | abuseGood, but I found the 2nd and 4th lines of the last verse a bit confusing. The eye didn't seem to fit in with the wolf reference, and "not how you want it" wasn't clear as to what you wouldn't want. Nice work! ~Gemma |
| concerto49 2007-08-04 ch 1, | abuseIt sounds full of suspense in a way. Felt it was a little loose and could have been more gripping. I liked the title. Had some interesting ideas. Anyhow. Cheerios. |