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| Twilight Starr 2007-11-03 ch 1,  | abuseI like the last two lines the best. Great job! ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Gemma Lovell 2007-10-10 ch 1, | abuseI know this is old and you've improved since you wrote this, and there's no way for you to fix it, but just for the record in the line "My eyes is an open door", the "is" should be "are". Great job, I really loved it! Love, Gemma |
| concerto49 2007-08-04 ch 1, | abuse"My eyes is a open door" - that was cool. Seems like it's opened a lot of issues, but everything's left unresolved. More of a questioning and a touch angst feel. Definitely sounds more tragic and tragedy but too little to tell. Anyhow. Cheers. |