Great poem. It's heart breaking. Fantastic work.

~Twilight Starr~

love it so much like i love you (as a friend of course) your getting better and better each day.
this poem is awsome!

This is so good. Deeply depressing but in a good-i-like-morbid- kinda way.

~silent

Wow 0_0 this is... just wow. In a good way, I think. Well, I think you should change the rating to something a bit higher and maybe add 'angst' as part of the genre.