| Reviews for The Simple Things |
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Icyfire4w5 3/19/09 . chapter 1I am smiling now because of your poem... Wow, this proves that you can be influential. |
softer side of apples 11/4/07 . chapter 1Thanks for this truth I am smiling now lol... love this! |
the face in the window 10/19/07 . chapter 1I don't know if reviewed this on my old account or not - and I'm too lazy to check if I did. So...yeah. I love this, it's so true. Really great haiku. P.S. I posted. You should review. *pokes* xD Rowan. |
All Alone With Her Thoughts 8/25/07 . chapter 1So true. Nice haiku. Rowan. |
Chidori Nadare 8/14/07 . chapter 1You know, this really made me smile. Simple things makes life so worthwhile. I agree with the reviews about the rhyme thing. A haiku that rhymes? That's unbelievable, such a short poem that rhymes. I'm going to add this to my faves. Well done! -C.N |
half-sketched.staccatos 8/12/07 . chapter 1konnichi wa Wow, this was amazing! Just like the simple things are what make life worthwhile, simple words are almost always the best in poetry. I thought this was beautiful, and it was unbelievable how you were able to make it rhyme. I've never seen a rhyming hiaku - I always figured it was too short to come up with a rhyme that didn't sound crappy. Kudos! Zaijen -shan- |
Which Mistake am I 8/8/07 . chapter 1Lol this on emade me smile after i read Lol! :D Great Job! |
Basara 8/5/07 . chapter 1simple things people ignore... yet they are very special if applied... nice... |
tearing hands 8/4/07 . chapter 1I think it's the only haiku I've ever read that rhymed, and I really liked it. The rhyme gave it a really nice rhythm. Good job! |
MetalCloud 8/4/07 . chapter 1Cool. Very true. And usually so overlooked by people concerned with other things than the simple things |
bao.bei 8/4/07 . chapter 1I like it! It really is the simple things that can make me happy when I'm down. This one will definitely have a special place, close to my heart. Thanx. |
Thenardier 8/4/07 . chapter 1I love this. It's so true. One note though, the first line has 4 syllabus instead of 5. Other than that, this was wonderful |