we want more

good story. i can't wiat for more.
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update soon =]

Whoa I am a first time reader of your story but I am interested in it I read only 13 chapter, but cant wait to read more I hope you update soon ohh as far as I read this is one great story :)

oh **! UPDATE SOON!

wow! i love a good flashback!!

that was awesome update really soon

lol. Oh my gosh. Wow. lol. Good chapter. Please update again soon. I can't WAIT to read the next chapter! XD

it's good!! update again soon!

It's a good chapter, but you might want to work on your grammar and spelling a bit. Other than that it was good.

update soon!

so is it a wolf that has saved her or wat?

so good! update again soon!! love it!

Good Lord in Heaven, this chapter was barely swallowable D:
I'm so sorry; you're obviously putting effort to it, but the angst of the female protagonist is just too much and so unreal...

...I hope my critic comment helps you grow as a writer.

The end of this chapter was a bit SCARY. Lumen kind of...frightens me now. Or as I would rather put it: Strikes fear into my very core. Can't wait to read the next chapter. XD.

P.S. Lumen is now on my list of good-looking evil meanies who I absolutely hate but must be in the story to make it more dramatic and suspenseful. Wow, that's surrtenly a mouthful. lol. I'll have to shorten the title of that list a bit. XD.

Wow. That is one powerful being Kara's got on her plate. Sweet.