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| A Healing Heart 2007-12-12 ch 1,  | abuseDude! You're Awesome! Write more! Your Great! -Blade's Queen of Desires |
| outsidersgirl 2007-08-06 ch 1, | abusegood |
| concerto49 2007-08-04 ch 1, | abuse"She turn around." - turned It was rather sweet, but not gripping enough. I think the start should have been very negative to push for the sweet moment. Perhaps it was too short, and in that sense you needed to use better and stronger words to keep it going. Anyhow. Cheers. |
| xx Twilight 2007-08-04 ch 1, | abusecute (: |