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| Twilight Starr 2007-10-09 ch 1,  | abuseInteresting view of the "storm" within. Brilliant job! ~Twilight Starr~ |
| xXKittieXx 2007-08-04 ch 1, | abuse"The storm is blowing on Raging over sea and land Blowing up dust and sand" Was my favorite part. It was a little short, but I appreciated it. Alot of songs now-a-days are about love. I just like the whole storm idea. It kind of reminds me about my song, "Rain". The rhyming was a little off sometimes, but I liked it. I gave it a faster tune, kind of a pop rock, kind of thing. I hope that's what it was meant for... I give it a 2.75 or 3 of 5. ~Happy Writings! |