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katt's got your tongue
2008-01-18
ch 1,
abuseTHIS IS AWESOME.
YOU AS A WRITER IS AWESOME.
your rhymes are contagious and the message is clear. loveitloveitloveit
+faves!
Kneeling Glory
2007-12-02
ch 1,
abuseLOVE this! Could so see it turning into a song.
Definition
2007-09-02
ch 1,
abuseYou've stripped anger down to the core. This is so hardcore, so raw and brutal.

The repetition is excellent. It really emphasizes your point and feeling. Nice!
Faithless Juliet
2007-08-19
ch 1,
abuseI love the raw anger in this - Really, I loved that you got this angry, it was like your thoughts were just flying from your head, to your mouth, to the page, it was thrilling. Wonderful work. Real, and emotional (the best kind of poetry.) Keep up the good work.

Much love,
Juliet.
Toxic.Industrial.Waste
2007-08-05
ch 1,
abuseOh this one made me smile. Vengeful, hateful, with a lighter sarcastic side. I had a horrible day and this is just what I needed.

~Ericaskyy
Qwerty16
2007-08-05
ch 1,
abuseAs always, your poetry has such feeling. So many raw emotions. I hope no one in particular inspired this...:\
Frog Tongue
2007-08-04
ch 1,
abuseI like this. The feeling is very strongly expressed.
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