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=/ 2008-06-28 ch 3, anon.	abuseYou should have named it "Clean Up On Aisle 3"... since you know there are 3 chapters. Yeah, I dunno. Good story, I am not sure it is enough to win the most humorous SKOW award. We'll see though. I wish you luck I guess.
Ngoc1231 2008-06-26 ch 3,	abuseHaha cute. I thought maybe they would just run into each other again, not him actually live where she is. But I loved the part where he came when he was all beat up. That was really cute and poor him, trying to find an excuse to why he beat up Matt haha. ~~Ngoc1231~~
angelps7 2008-06-18 ch 3,	abuselmao she names it after one of HP's balls!! hahahah. Sorry I'm obsessed with HP... lol. OH GOODNESS I love this story! What a brilliant pace and you write so well, I love it! Love love love it! It's so brilliant. I love how I'm put in Jasmine's shoes so closely through the POV, and the dialogue is so witty, and everything is just so smooth! I laughed so hard too. Wow, great job!
angelps7 2008-06-18 ch 1,	abuseomg I absolutely love this so far. Extremely well written, so much detail, but in the way that makes you feel as if you're there... and very original writing too... and who would have thought knocking over a soup pyramid would make for such fantastic story material?! I was glued from the beginning- lol the dye- haha that is so true! Everything is just so perfect here, you are a FANTASTIC writer! A real talent for it, honestly. I could imagine this whole thing in my mind, so comical lol! Onto chapter 2.. :)
Entice 2008-03-02 ch 3, anon.	abuse“I go through the trouble of getting you a present and you decide to name it after one of Harry Potter’s balls.” hahaha! well derek, she couldn't possibly name it after one of yours.. that would be just weird.
Entice 2008-03-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseHaha!... but i feel some sympathy for the poor shopkeeper peoples... they will never get their tomato thingy up...
emerald 2008-03-02 ch 3, anon.	abuseOh, that was fun. Short, sweet, quirky and just plain wonderful. It's the perfect way to meet and hit it off with your Prince Charming.:)
Faith Adeline 2008-02-29 ch 3,	abuseaw, very cute short story. Bit confusing at time, what with the jumping over time, but I liked it! Keep it up! Faith
cbprice25 2008-02-10 ch 3,	abuseOh! I like it. But you know, you could have made it a lot longer. Included all the details you glossed over: the toga fight, the ostrich cell phone dropping, etc. Congrats on your nomination & good luck!
Sarah Allie 2008-02-09 ch 3,	abuseHAHAHAH that was funny :P! Especially Derek's last quote :P Great job :D Sarah :) x
Sarah Allie 2008-02-09 ch 1,	abuseNice, I really like this :) I'll go read the rest of the chapters now :)
Peach8321 2008-02-02 ch 3, anon.	abuseA cute story, but it sort of seems like you took a beginning, middle, and end chapter of a longer story and stuck them together. For short stories, try to keep the time line short as well...this story would be marvelous with another 15-22 chapters but as it is, it is kind of confusing. It is somewhat humorous though so I applaud the effort. good luck with future writing.
SparklingStar25 2008-02-01 ch 3,	abuseThis is really good! and good luck with skow!
bucketheadkt 2008-01-29 ch 3,	abuseCongratulations, InkIllusionist! Your story, Clean Up on Aisle 9, has been nominated for Most Humorous (Complete) section in our awards site, Some Kind of Wonderful Romance Awards. Keep up the fantastic work! =] - Katie http://skow. SKoW Judge
IndigoAzucena 2008-01-06 ch 3,	abuseThis story was really good You have the "funny but not stupid thing" down pat Good job! I look forward to reading more stuff by you

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