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Reviews For: We Won't Survive

xXKittieXx
2007-08-04
ch 1,
abuseI liked it. It had a nice rhyme to it, and it flowed pretty well. It's also long enough FOR a song, it's not like it's just a poem. The favorite part is the chours.^^
I'd have to give it a 3 of 5.

~Happy Writings!
bratja
2007-08-04
ch 1,
abuseThe line "It's all in fate's hands now / And I'm sure it wants us to die" is my favorite part of this.

It's nice, except I'm not quite sure what you mean when you say "since our eyes went bright".

Other than that, I like this.
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