sniff sniff. that was so sweet. it was pure perfection. ya know if you just add a lil chorous to this, it would make a really great song. hint hint. i loved it!

I loved it! The part about our souls that is priceless lol! It really did sound good in a poem! But thank you so much for everything! I can't believe you put the part about lil alan in there that is just great!