I dedicate this song to my ex. Great job!

I like it. It rhymes very well. However, I feel that the course should ends. It like ends on a note, if you know what I mean. I think you could add a couple more lines, and it'll be really good.^^

I give it a 3 of 5.

~Happy Writings!

Hmm...decent enough I suppose, though some of the lines sounded slightly forced in my opinion. But overall you did a nice job with this.

~Arafax~