|Reviews for On and Off|
| xoxopresley 3/4/08 . chapter 1
I dedicate this song to my ex. Great job!
| Beautiful Bones 8/6/07 . chapter 1
I like it. It rhymes very well. However, I feel that the course should ends. It like ends on a note, if you know what I mean. I think you could add a couple more lines, and it'll be really good.
I give it a 3 of 5.
| Arafax 8/5/07 . chapter 1
Hmm...decent enough I suppose, though some of the lines sounded slightly forced in my opinion. But overall you did a nice job with this.