i just noticed the title of chapter two. very catchy!!
darla's a **. i loved this line: "He also loved her accents which were about to pop out". a very clever play on words :) haha and i like how he called the police at the end! it seems like you're putting a lot of thought into this. but it seems a little disorganized. like i don't really know why he's going to his grandma's. to get her signature for his savings? maybe you could explain what he's up to in the next chapter. post soon! -suze

i love how the whole love scene turned out to be just a dream. it surprised me when he woke up! i totally thought it was actually happening. great job! i'll keep clicking here...

haha whoa. dirty thoughts there, ethan...
well written!! i love how ethan was thinking about how he could kill the dean in one of his stories. that was really imaginative of you! great job with this.
hmm i don't really see how the title relates, though. except if you were referring to the blonde in the passengers seat, which in that case would be a hallucination...
but good job overall :D