Reviews for Right on Time - FictionPress.com

total vintage 2007-09-17 ch 1,	abuseaww that was so cute =] i like how u did like...hm i don't know the word for it. well i like how u had it end like the beginnig. does that make sense? if not sorry!
Lily Llynn 2007-08-09 ch 1,	abuseAww... so cute. :D So glad Mizz-Insane discovered this and suggested it to me! :D adds to c2
concerto49 2007-08-05 ch 1,	abuseWell, we're all improving and learning as we go so no worries. Have some confidence. Some realistic portrayals. Some good ideas. The intro this way was a tad more interesting than the norm, but it could be pushed that bit more. Good use of italics. Could make do with more descriptions about the characters thoughts/feelings/emotions and their appearance/setting. Anyhow. Cheers.
butterfly.kisses.07 2007-08-04 ch 1,	abuseAw, that was so cute...
where's the turtle 2007-08-04 ch 1,	abuseI really liked this, it is how you would expect your best friend, who has always liked you, to ask you out, but it never happens.
Lizzy-Lou 2007-08-04 ch 1,	abuseYou advertised me! You're my hero! Oh, and this one-shot is to damned cute! I love it! It's going on my favorites!