i just found this today on "undiscovered" and blasted through reading the whole story!

i love the originality of the plot and the interactions between Ashe and Gav, so cute :) i see there is a sequal, im there! - but maybe tomorrow...

one of the best stories here!!

This was deffinatly diffrent than anything that I've ever read, but good none the less. When I finished reading the epilogue I was all like, "Aw." I am compleatly impressed that you could make a good romance story out of a person with a voice in her head, hahaha.

Just found ur story! Seems pretty interesting so far...I read the first parts of the next chapter and I like ur humour! I'd rather stop here for today though cause I've loads of work to catch up and that's making me tense! Anyway, I'm looking forward to more!

Awesome story. I loved it. Great characters, even greater plot. Super creativity and originality. Kudos.

I bow down to you, O Author. That was amazing. SO cute and SO well-written. I completely got into the characters and I'm such a pushover for a good, sappy ending. Plus, it was great seeing this style! I completely forgot I was reading the work by the same author who writes such lovely epic series. Absolutely fantastic!

that was so entertaining. unique plot.

This was such an awsome story! Really creative too :)
Almost makes me wish I had a voice in my head like that too ;p Anyway, really good job!

This is honestly the best story I have read on FP. I truly praise you for this work. I read it in under an hour, and can't believe how well you write.

This was so good:)
Definitely one of the best stories i have read out there! It actually had a good plot that did not completely revolve around romance...
I understand what you mean by the story's writing being simpler for teens(i am one)and even though i would have preferred if it weren't, at least the writing does not lack professionalism.It is a light read(sort of)but it reels you in from the start and is kinda hard to walk away from.
You should really try to get this published.
This one goes on my favourites;)

this was AMAZZINNG!
I'm in love with your writing- and i hope you get published one day.
Love Gav and Ashe!!
I knew there was something off with Nigel but i wasn't expecting him to be that kid.
well just wanna say aamazing job!
n now im going to read the sequel MY NINJA!

LOVE LOVE LOVED this story! I love the way you portrayed Ashe and the whole story line was well thought up and crazy but interesting!

Keep workin your magic! :]

Mai-lee

I went to Mount Zion High School in Jonesboro, GA, and the high school you're describing is suspiciously like mine with the statutory rape...I suppose all American high schools are the same, but seriously, its eerie.

This story is by far the best internet-written-by-a-teenager(I think you're a teenager?) story I have read ever! It is so unbelievanly unique, I am in awe! I must say i'm sad it ended but quite happy it turned out the way it did :) Your characters were set up so well and the emotions were so real. I am ecstatic that I happend to stumble across this story today!

I just finished reading this story, and I absolutely love it.

First of all, the writing was actually good. I know you mentioned in the beginning how it's not supposed to be the best-written story out there, but there aren't any grammatical or mechanical errors (at least, none that are obvious to me when I read it), and I can't count how many times I've read stories that have made me wince.

The characterization in here is fantastic. The MC has a really strong voice, and I like how the plot isn't predictable, and how the romance and everything is subtle. The characters are all well-developed and believable to me, as well.

This is the first of your stories that I've read, but it's inspired me to go check some of your others out. Good luck at SKoW Awards!
- Ekkaia