I loved this story. I enjoyed how you set the letters in. It was amazing. Your writing was soothing and soft, yet imaginative and colorful. I would love to have a book of short stories by you sitting by my bedside.

A damn good short-short. Generally I dislike writing from the point of view of something like an organ, but you manage to make the lips consequential. Also, though I personally like the use of interjected phrases couched in hyphens, be sure not to overdo it.