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Reviews For: Firewater Spells

critic
2007-08-05
ch 1, anon.
abuseI loved this story. I enjoyed how you set the letters in. It was amazing. Your writing was soothing and soft, yet imaginative and colorful. I would love to have a book of short stories by you sitting by my bedside.
Pontifus
2007-08-04
ch 1,
abuseA damn good short-short. Generally I dislike writing from the point of view of something like an organ, but you manage to make the lips consequential. Also, though I personally like the use of interjected phrases couched in hyphens, be sure not to overdo it.
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