Reviews for Laundry and Prayer

HGiel 2007-08-05 ch 1,	abuseThis was sweet, very simple and nice. I hadn't ever read a story with a laundry theme before either~
concerto49 2007-08-05 ch 1,	abuseBold the title perhaps? Could do with a touch of dialogue. Some good imagery. Need more on thoughts/feelings/emotions of persona. Some of the sentences need more work on, but generally okay. Anyhow. Cheers.