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| Midnight In Eden 2007-08-10 ch 1,  | abuseMore effective use of line breaks, using punctuation throughout this piece instead of just here and there as well as using more vivid imagery would help pull this piece up from a conceptual outline to a poem. Short review but that's basically how to improve this piece. .:midnight:. |