Okay, in the beginning i thought Jacob was a total **, but the ending of chapter two was so unexpected! haha love ya, and you need to come to school more ofter, love Raven-Illeen

This is another very awesome piece!

ok, so how can you have only one review!
second chapter pretty much made my day.
i'm hoping after you post 357489745 more chapters that Jacob and Ezekiel get together and hump like bunnies.
seriously, in my head im planning their wedding.

Ya know...it's easier for other people to catch mistakes then the one who wrote it. If you'd like, I could beta your stories for you. If you'd like that, just message karu or prisoner-11 on fp and the message will get to me. Of course, you can tell me to shut up, and I'll still read your stories, you just won't hear from me.