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Reviews For: Without You

Twilight Starr
2007-11-24
ch 1,
abuseI'm sorry about your friend. Good poem.

~Twilight Starr~
life like whoa
2007-09-07
ch 1,
abuseI miss her too hun..

we will get through this.
we may not be the 3 musketeers
running crazy around the school
but we still have each other
and we still have her in spirit.
Ammom
2007-09-06
ch 1,
abuseI feel sad that your best friend is gone...I can't imagine what that's like. There were two parts of this poem that hit hard, and I'm surprised it hasn't been reviewed yet.

The first part was this line, "Every step and every turn." Something about it was very strong.

The last part was the last two lines. I can't really describe THAT feeling, but I'm sure you know it very well.
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