Thanks, Mina! :D I can remember some of the differences. The only feedback I would give is that Naiya doesn't always react as would expect from someone having amnesia. She's not afraid of her powers and doesn't ask any questions about her family or previous life. Also, no one who knew her before has tried to contact her. Were all her possessions destroyed on the transport, and aren't her muscles very weak from two years in a coma? What do you think?

another excellent chapter! i really love your descriptions. they're eloquent without being too wordy. great job with that! i promise i'll try to catch up with the rest of the story eventually. work and college prep are taking over my life! lol.

first of all, thanks so much for submitting to my C2. i appreciate that. and secondly, this story is absolutely fascinating. i love it. as soon as i have the time, i'm going to catch up with it. the story itself is very interesting, and some of your descriptions are remarkably creative. i'd really love to add it to my C2, with your permission. keep up the good work!