Ok this is the most awesome and most confusing story ever!! And thats after reading this Chapter

I'm so in love with this story, i hope you haven't given up on it

PLEASE UPDATE *gives a thousand virtual cookies and puppy dog eyes* please don't drop this story it is awesome and you are awesome and and and... yeah! That didn't make much sense I apologize I love your stories and this is one of my favorites and i just got done rereading it and now I really want the next chapter.

A very intresting story. I like it. And to keep this from being my shortest review ever...

A few mistakes here and there, but nothing too noticable, and nothing bad. I like Allen's humor :)

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this is so amazingly good, please tell me you plan on continuing it! PLease! i beg you on my knees...

**begs on knees**

Nice. :D

Will you be adding more to this story? It is very good...and I think you should continue on with it. I just read from 1-14 between yesterday and today, and I would love to see more come to it.

okay, first off, a scary thought for me: My page ended at the comment about the world exploding if he didn't see him off to school, and i thought "mine will" and then scrolled the page... and there it was... I'm wierd like his dad! *cries*...

moving on...

Chapter was awesome... and amasing... and wow... can't wait to read the whole story :)

Can't wait to see what happens next. please write more.

I read this story and I think it could be really good. The story seems to be all over the place. I really like this plot and I think Allen and Damien have really great chemistry. I'm hoping that you'll eventually come back to it or that maybe you could start a new story with the same plot. I really, really like this story so please don't let it die.

I love you.

i really like this story, first it's funny as hell! So much drama and still so much mystery!
I'm anxious for the next part, please update soon!

Wow. This is amazing. I love it. I'm completely hooked on your story!! I simply can't wait for more!!

Its such a strange story but I can't wait to read more. Thanks!!

this story is so ** fantastic in all its crazy randomness