I really liked the last two chapters. Completely wasn't expecting that!

Aw, shit.

I had goosebumps after reading the whole of the five chapters.D:I can see it all happening before my eyes. And I am in complete awe at the idea of you being able to complete this piece in this certain way.

DAMN.

This is what they call 'genius', I suppose.

This concept is SO brilliant. Giving two stories completely different endings by simply flipping the order of the chapters - that's genius. I'm so blown away.

Annoyance

By the way, will you PLEASE post this on PH? I think the readers there will really love it :) (I'm annoyance15 on LJ)

It's well written, but I still don't fully understand it. I really like your short stories, well the ones I've read so far. This one is just really confusing. I understand it was a relationship, but not how things worked.

Hey! This is pretty cool.

It was very difficult to remember which section went with which story line and I had to read your note on the flip before I figured out how to put them together. Perhaps italicizing one story line would help?

That was really creative. Nice job.

:O interesting. Sounds good, can't wait to find out for myself. :)

you're incredible with words. :)

Wow, it's like an optical illusion, except literary!

I really liked this. It was different, and very intriguing. I'm glad you posted it - it was wonderfully refreshing break from the usual linearly fashioned story. It's on my favorites.

so I kinda get it. and I kinda don't. but it's wonderful anyway and I love it :]

I'm guessing one story is about a woman who loves the man but then it turns out he doesn't... and the other is the woman unsure of her love and he doesn't really love her but they end up together anyway? wow.. that made sense in my head... not so sure here.

wow, what a brilliant concept. is yours the only story like it? this is *so* artful, i'm jealous.

ambiguous end ... I like it!

write another mini fic please :P

Ok so I really liked this. It's very unusual compared to the stories that you normally see on here for a start but I like the way you taken the concept that everything goes around in circles and the start of something can be the end of something else.

that was COOL. so cool so cool