Reviews for Objection Overruled

Reviews For: Objection Overruled

Hed in the Cloudz 2008-05-24 ch 1,	abuseI love the end! It's not the fact that the judge shot the lawyer (who, by the way, I adore) but that he expects the trial to go on normally for a crime that's identical to that he just committed-- well done! And the fact that you have only dialogue just makes it more intriguing, certainly. But then, because of the lack of words besides dialogue, it's hard to follow the story. Once we know that there are four characters, it's okay, but for the first quarter of the story the conversation could conceivably be between three people, one of whom is rather confused. It would be wonderful if you could just have someone introduce the case-- tell us who's prosecuting, who's defending, who's on trial. Just a sentence is all that would be necessary to make this a million times less confusing! --Yna, from the Review Marathon (see the link in my profile!)
xx-cronopio-xx 2007-12-26 ch 1,	abuseThis is hilarious.
Lena Niccolas 2007-08-20 ch 1,	abuseit was funny! Although I thought I should let you know, that sounded like a cross examination and during crosses you're supposed to using "leading" questions. During a direct examination, you're supposed to leave them open ended.
TiggerTheParalympian 2007-08-20 ch 1,	abuseHe had it coming! Good job
Anti-Reality 2007-08-07 ch 1,	abuseThat was hilarious! I especially loved the end. Poor Mr. Collins... He had it coming, though.
Kita Tsuki 2007-08-06 ch 1,	abuselmao. That was funny. Nice one-shot! Peace.
Lightning Storm 2007-08-05 ch 1,	abuseHa Ha hilarious. this one made me wake up my little brother :P Awesome job, very nice
RandoMaia 2007-08-05 ch 1,	abuseHah, this made me laugh. Very amusing. ^^ (Although, from the summary, I thought it'd turn into a hot steamy sex scene... and then wondered how you'd show that with all dialogue... o.0 you should totally give this story another chapter, as an alternate ending, and have a big sex scene. ^^)

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