I liked this! I know how you feel... I'm not really friends with the girl, but I can't be around her. She makes me feel like I can't add up to her.

Anyway, there were a few mistakes I plucked out if you want some concrit:

"the false accuses" should be the false accusations,
"If you would have given me the change" - I think change should have been chance, right?

There were a few missing commas and such, but I'm not gonna be that nit-picky and make the review that long. If you'd like me to show you, just PM me. :)

wow brie thats amazing i rele felt your pain thhats SO good...its going into my favs!

Wow. I'm not going to say anthing as intelligent as the other reviews but all I have to say is that that girl is SADLY mistaken and she is missing out on a great girl (and a very great writer i may add). It was a powerful piece, Brie. Very good. I thought it was perfect because you said how you felt and those fics are always the best.

wow. that was a really good writing piece. i know exactly how you feel. i met a girl in kindergarten, and we were friends for years. i went to camps with my friend all summer after 6th grade, but as soon as we got to our new middle school, i didn't exist to her. i'm sorry you had to deal with the same thing.

I liked this. It had a very raw feel to it, it was easy to tell there was real emotion behind it. And in a way, I can relate. I've never felt that way entirely about a friend... but there are times I do things I wouldn't normally do to impress a girl or guy who I want to think I'm cool. It doesn't seem like such a big deal until you look back on it later, and you realize you're compromising yourself for this one person. Believe me, I know the feeling.

I thought this could have been a little more polished in a few places, but most of it was written well, and relatable... good job. ;)