|Reviews for Greedy Soul|
| Yaolyn 9/2/07 . chapter 1
I know little to nothing about haikus, but I really love the message in this one.
| tearing hands 8/11/07 . chapter 1
I love the bolded "nothing" and the title and the message. Good job.
| Thenardier 8/8/07 . chapter 1
Nicely written, love the choice of the title.
| Basara 8/7/07 . chapter 1
hm... well, if things don't go in one's way... well, it's option to do that... but not much...
| xDancingintheRainx 8/6/07 . chapter 1
I like the independence of this piece and the untraditional form of haiku. Great work!
| andfound815 8/6/07 . chapter 1
I like it! Great job... powerful.
Can you read and review my story "Eight Minutes" please? Thank you!
| Chidori Nadare 8/6/07 . chapter 1
True love and happiness can never be bought by money. The emphasis on nothing just makes the message clear. Good job!
| Next Exit 8/5/07 . chapter 1
a tip about haikus... they are technically not a haiku if all you do is take a sentence and break it up by syllable. its supposed to be 3 separate thoughts that tie together. not that i always follow this rule, but it might be helpful the next time you write a haiku.