I know little to nothing about haikus, but I really love the message in this one.

I love the bolded "nothing" and the title and the message. Good job.

Nicely written, love the choice of the title.

hm... well, if things don't go in one's way... well, it's option to do that... but not much...

nice...

I like the independence of this piece and the untraditional form of haiku. Great work!

I like it! Great job... powerful.

Can you read and review my story "Eight Minutes" please? Thank you!

True love and happiness can never be bought by money. The emphasis on nothing just makes the message clear. Good job!

-C.N

a tip about haikus... they are technically not a haiku if all you do is take a sentence and break it up by syllable. its supposed to be 3 separate thoughts that tie together. not that i always follow this rule, but it might be helpful the next time you write a haiku.