This story is definitly one of your best! I love it.
It would be great if there were more stories situated in this world ... The whole thing with the Leithels and the prejudice of full-bloods was really interesting. I hope to be able to buy your books in a few years!

Hmm, this story wasn't as good as your Sun series. The plot was okay...it was certainly original! I didn't like that you seemed to portray all Fairies as rather ditzy and Dwarves as evil slavers. Also I didn't think that Kali should have had to change who she fundamentally was in order to be with Garik. Yes, they were true loves, but I would expect that her magic was a huge part of her that no one would give up.

Aw! What a great story! good job

I love this story. Keep writing.

I absolutely LOVED this story! FANTASTIC job! I thought it was very well written and entertaining, and the characters were well-developed. I really hope to see you a published author someday! =)

you should enter nanowrimo (national novel writing month). it ends nov 30 this year, and you have to write a 50 thousand word plus story, but if you consider how fast you update stories, that should be no problem at all for you. you're a really talented writer and somewhere along the line it's possible to sell your book on amazon, or something. or just do it for fun, or practice, or something. google it. you totally should enter. there's still time. do it.

oh, and this story was absolutely wonderful. kali/garik are cute together, and it was just awesome! the world you've created here is fantastic. amazing story.

Aww, how sweet! :) I loved this story. I'm sad Yaria died, though. She was awesome. D;

I love how you write - everything flows, the plots are creative and everything fits together, the characters are lovable...

Well, I could babble on forever about how awesome your stories are, but I'll just end it with a simple "I loved it."

^-^ I look forward to reading more of your work.

This story is absolutely amazing. I'm so glad to find such a creative and original story! I like your writing and your way of presenting the characters and the plot. I thought it was all excellent.

^_^ Akuwa Marene

hm...among all your stories, this is my absolute fave..=o) keep writing, ur great at it!!=o)

I really enjoyed this story, I loved the plots and twists you added it keeps me wanting more.
Your an amazing writer!

This story has been captivating - like all your other stories =) I still deeply admire your extensive creativity. Kudos to being such a great author and creating such fantastic stories!

So sweet!

Great ending, as always. Ridiculously romantic. I love that.

One thing: You've made this mistake in 3 or 4 different stories. The word meaning "the span or scope of an issue, situation, etc." is EXTENT, not EXTANT. Anyway.

Congrats on another great story! I think this is one of my absolute favorites. It has an amazing, intricate plot.

So sad . . . I'm almost crying.

And I'm sorry I said Kaden's Leithel blood was what made him all psychotic . . . I was using Balavar as a model, and forgot that Kirkan is Leithel too. So Kaden's just got violent tendencies all on his own. And him being half-Leithel only makes them even more deadly than if he were just an Elf or something. I get it now. It's still cool.

Ah, but Garik and Kali . . . why? I mean, I know why, but it's horrible. And so sweet.

That was intense. It's amazing that you can bring out Kaden's violent - almost manic or psychopathic - Leithel blood while still keeping him a sympathetic character. He makes me shiver, but I like him anyways. Cool!

Wow. What a sad, gripping way to begin a story.