This is a very interesting view of death. I love the fact that after the son dies all the father sees is black snow. It really shows the pain someone goes through after the death of a loved one. I also like the fact that you're not too sure why the snow is black until the end of the poem and then the effect of the poem hits you.

gorgeous, this is more like a story written in poem form. very well written. it is full of sadness and hate and innocence. i feel really bad for the speaker and his situation.

aw, that's an angst story, the way he narrates the events it sounds so cold as if he doesn't mind anymore but at the same time, he's really heartbroken.

My Psychology Professor had a similar situation happen to his son... I will keep you in my prayers. Kind Regards,
Katie Kat (Kat-Renee Kittel)