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| Estelin 2008-07-22 ch 9,  | abusethis was great. keep up the good work and writing. i can not wait for more. |
| I'mYourChemicalRomance 2008-06-03 ch 1, | abuseI Love this story! Just like your Perfection one!:33 I love twist! |
| StarEyed14 2008-02-02 ch 8, | abuseokay.. i think Keir and Cora are meant to be together.. as cliche as that sounds. But Baltzar should be the guy friend that she never had.. just a friend. I hope she gets to be with her sister soon. it's so sad how her bro's treat her. sigh* good story so far though, -stareyed14 |
| Enaid 2008-01-24 ch 3, | abuseok so i love making predictions whether they turn out to be right or wrong idc so here is goes keir is def going to fall in love with cora(such a pretty name by the way) |
| Enaid 2008-01-24 ch 2, | abusehaha i had been wondering why the guy had been so disgusted that the cyrus guy had done it w/ her. now i know... lol |
| imaRIOT 2008-01-24 ch 8, | abuseI hate suspense... but I LOVE The story xD |
| jami 2008-01-08 ch 8, anon. | abuseyou know i really hate you sometimes...lol. Just keep us on a cliff, eh? and i get wat u mean. dont want it to feel good but it does. maybe she just cant help it, ya know?...i feel sry for her. and i liked Baltzar. He was a'ight. |
| KillianPanic 2008-01-05 ch 8, | abusewah a cliff hanger! update :) |
| Twilight Starr 2008-01-04 ch 8, | abusePoor Cora. Nice addition. Have a lovely day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| FM Radio 2008-01-03 ch 8, | abuseWHO IS IT? WHO IS IT? WHO IS IT? WHO IS IT? WHO IS IT? WHO IS IT? WHO IS IT? WHO IS IT? WHO IS IT? WHO IS IT? And why in the world is everything underlined? Update asap! |
| people.are.strange. 2008-01-03 ch 8, | abuseWonder who's in the trees and whose side they're on. Like if Baltzar was to come back and attack though I don't believe he had weapons on him.. |
| Black Laced Heart 2008-01-03 ch 8, | abuseUpdate soon! |
| Jami 2007-12-06 ch 7, anon. | abuseYes plz have a little somethinsomethin go on between them, lol. Their whole dialogue was very cute but serious...i dont know, i cant explain it, but i liked them together, keep it up!^-^ |
| Cinera 2007-12-05 ch 7, | abuseIn answer to your question, yes, I can feel some chemistry there. I'm looking foreward to the next chapter. |
| Cinera 2007-12-05 ch 5, | abusethis story moves really quickly, and I can't really understand what's going on... maybe I'm missing something or maybe it's intentional suspense. If it is, you can't really tell because it flows oddly. But I'm not trying to badmouth your story. I like it a lot actually. The plot seems fasinating, I'm just trying to understand it better. I hope I didn't come off as bitchy. |