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| Sexy vampirechick 2007-08-17 ch 2, | abuseo_O Counting steps huh? Wow,if I start doing that I think I might trip. The way you use your words really capture me into your story.Very good in descriptive writing.I wish I could do it just like you. |
| Sexy vampirechick 2007-08-06 ch 1, | abuseVery nice use of words. I like " I let her sweet melody soak into my veins". From here it sounds like a sweet love story,wonder how you'll twist it into a murderous story. |