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Reviews For: Music Love, Music Murder

Sexy vampirechick
2007-08-17
ch 2,
abuseo_O Counting steps huh? Wow,if I start doing that I think I might trip.

The way you use your words really capture me into your story.Very good in descriptive writing.I wish I could do it just like you.
Sexy vampirechick
2007-08-06
ch 1,
abuseVery nice use of words. I like " I let her sweet melody soak into my veins".

From here it sounds like a sweet love story,wonder how you'll twist it into a murderous story.
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