 xDancingintheRainx 2007-08-06 . chapter 1Wow. This piece earned a place on my favorites list! I like the first and second stanzas best, but the third one is definitely not bad. The last line in each stanza pulls each single haiku together, but the last line of the third haiku just pulls the entire piece together perfectly. That might not have made much sense, but great job on this piece! |