This piece was well written. I enjoyed reading it. Nice work. Keep it up.

~Arafax~

Man, that was beautiful! I really enjoyed this piece. God bless you indeed. Excellent work!!

I liked this piece, but the rhyming seemed a little forced in the beginning, but got much better towards the late middle and end. My favorite lines were: "She plagues intended honesty
she knows my life of mystery
Because she knows my history.
She used to be me.
Now she's feeling rejected,
fury unrespected,
the tempest still reflected
in me even now."
I absolutely love those lines. Nice work with this piece.