Beautiful! The last bit with the anaphora is well done, the flow was really well kept! Great poem! -Melissa

I don't know what exactly to tell you. It's beautiful really. My only critique is the very end. The words are great but something about the order leaves the reader hanging and cut off at the end. I guess it feels inconclusive. But unfortunately I don't know how to help you. It's still a great poem.
-Monkeydo (aka Ella)