Wow, this is really good! I can see the emotion and truth in this poem. My favorite line would have to be the last one: "Hold onto him before you're completely gone"
Excellent job, keep up the good work!
~Ali

Could have been twisted into something darker. Once again, I would like to say you have a way with simply putting out what must be said. Point blank, no real word games, no 't' flamigoing with 'q'. I am very impressed, yet stunned. By the simple way you slap stick what you write onto paper, and it gets your point across.

Nicely done. Just a note - "your whole being" (not you're).

Thank you for the review. I'm sorry it took a while for me to come around - I don't find myself much on FP anymore.

*CLAPS* OH my gosh! That's my situation right now! WOW! Awesome poem! I love the choice of words and there's a lot feeling into it! I'm serious! Awesome piece of work! I'd like to make a layout out of this! God bless my friend^_^ I hope to follow the advice of this poem yet I'm struggling...