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| Georgiana 2007-09-23 ch 1,  | abuseThis was really good. Short but concise. The story was very detailed, but you still managed to tell it without elaborating too much. I think it holds the air of an ancient myth. You said something in the summary about it having actual historic evidence as far as the written word goes, and the story sure seems accurate! Nice payback at the end there. I really appreciate the irony of it all:) The moral says something about honesty, right? Anyway. This story was somewhat grotesque, but I think it contributes nicely to the mood and the writing style. Great story=D |