The plot is a very good one. If you wanted, you could probably make it into a mini novel, or at least provide a sequel. Well done.

I LOVE IT!

It's has you hooked from the beginning. Very pleasing. Please post more soon.

LMAO. I like the dialogue corrections of the capitalization. I didn't know that sort of thing came through in dialogue. And a pope huh? Story has a grammar error or two,

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