 Loveless Breath 2009-08-27 . chapter 1AW! Oh, now I have to get the mail. I like it, it was cute. |
 Lolita Lilyette 2009-04-25 . chapter 1:D Yay!
A nice little F-you to the ditching friends!
There really aren't enough cute little stories anymore. :] |
 Catseye*Rose 2009-02-17 . chapter 1This was cute XD Mysterious French boys are always a plus. So, I guess he'll never know if he'd actually die on a rollercoaster...then again, maybe it's best not to test that theory... O.o I love André. He's a sweetie. |
 Jusmine 2009-01-06 . chapter 1Aw, that was absolutely adorable!
I almost died from the adorableness when Kellen said this: “Go find a coaster or something, Eli. In case you haven’t noticed, I’m busy.”
And when Andre licked him... that was priceless! ^__^
I absolutely loved this! It's brilliant. :D |
 StoicCrying 2008-11-19 . chapter 1LOL. This was so adorable, nice job!
I love how Andre said he has no gag reflex < Made me think about things no person should ever think- xD<
But so on, this is one the best I've ever read. |
 Sit In Solemn Silence 2008-09-05 . chapter 1Hahaha, that was cute! I loved it! I wish I could have figured out why andre didn't want to ride the roller coaster though... |
 Kidiu Anaji 2008-07-22 . chapter 1Myaa, this was so cute! |
 DMLpacker 2008-06-04 . chapter 1So very cute :D |
 krazyXthoughtsXsayari 2008-01-08 . chapter 1ahaha, I liked this a lot! It was funny and cute. Your over all plot thing was very unique. That was a hilarious but good ending!
Peace,
KTS |
 CaseyBear 2007-09-30 . chapter 1I loved it. It was cute... I love the part with the Mickey Mouse. |
 Garrett Bringer 2007-09-13 . chapter 1I don't care what you tried to go for, I loved it. It was adorable! XD |
 Sixkiller 2007-09-09 . chapter 1This was really cute and fluffy! I liked the ending ~ |
 StarRuby 2007-08-19 . chapter 1zomg that was so cute! :D I love it! I adore your stories; they make me feel warm inside. Er, well, maybe not all of them, but I love them anyway! XD And this was just amazing. Ahah. So cute. |
 mia5081 2007-08-16 . chapter 1That was so cute =)
~Mia |
 hollyjolly4u 2007-08-12 . chapter 1 bhahah universial that's where i live!! my friend wanted me to go with her tomorrow but it's too freakin hot outside and too many tourists. oh god I'm scared is he gonna get on a roller coaster at universial and die?!?!? now I'm twice as scared to go. have you been to universial before?? well i assuming you have b.c. you know about margaritaville this is soo funny b.c. me and my friends hang out in this place citywalk it's right before the universial park hahah it's weird reading about a place you've actually been too sorry back to the story!!
bhaha univerisal would prolly kick his ass for thinking that Micky mouse was there!! they're always so competetive ahaha. aw the lines are so long!! and i can only imagine how sad he was that he had to wait so long and then be told you're too short aww. thats wrong if you're friends scared from the beginning DO NOT LET HIM RIDE THE COASTER BY HIMSELF WITH STRANGE PPL.
awhh "You are okay, Kellen?” i love the way he asked that. and you're really good at writing with ppl with accents i dont know how to do that. i have a character that's british but i dont really know exactly if the writing for his convo's change you know? aww thats a cute ending! |