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| Kidiu Anaji 2008-07-22 ch 1, | abuseMyaa, this was so cute! |
| lilylupin7 2008-06-04 ch 1, | abuseSo very cute :D |
| krazyXthoughtsXsayari 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abuseahaha, I liked this a lot! It was funny and cute. Your over all plot thing was very unique. That was a hilarious but good ending! Peace, KTS |
| Casey and the Sunshine Bear... 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abuseI loved it. It was cute... I love the part with the Mickey Mouse. |
| Garrett Bringer 2007-09-13 ch 1, | abuseI don't care what you tried to go for, I loved it. It was adorable! XD |
| Sixkiller 2007-09-09 ch 1, | abuseThis was really cute and fluffy! I liked the ending ~ |
| StarRuby 2007-08-19 ch 1, | abusezomg that was so cute! :D I love it! I adore your stories; they make me feel warm inside. Er, well, maybe not all of them, but I love them anyway! XD And this was just amazing. Ahah. So cute. |
| mia5081 2007-08-16 ch 1, | abuseThat was so cute =) ~Mia |
| hollyjolly4u 2007-08-12 ch 1, anon. | abusebhahah universial that's where i live!! my friend wanted me to go with her tomorrow but it's too freakin hot outside and too many tourists. oh god I'm scared is he gonna get on a roller coaster at universial and die?!?!? now I'm twice as scared to go. have you been to universial before?? well i assuming you have b.c. you know about margaritaville this is soo funny b.c. me and my friends hang out in this place citywalk it's right before the universial park hahah it's weird reading about a place you've actually been too sorry back to the story!! bhaha univerisal would prolly kick his ** for thinking that Micky mouse was there!! they're always so competetive ahaha. aw the lines are so long!! and i can only imagine how sad he was that he had to wait so long and then be told you're too short aww. thats wrong if you're friends scared from the beginning DO NOT LET HIM RIDE THE COASTER BY HIMSELF WITH STRANGE PPL. awhh "You are okay, Kellen?” i love the way he asked that. and you're really good at writing with ppl with accents i dont know how to do that. i have a character that's british but i dont really know exactly if the writing for his convo's change you know? aww thats a cute ending! |
| nonaccount 2007-08-10 ch 1, | abuseIt is an "unbearably cute one-shot" but I am a big fan of those! It's my damn sweet tooth I think. ;) Cute last line, "my life did end. I traded it in for a better one." Adorable. Crap, now I want ice cream. |
| DANCE.PARTY.TRAGEDY 2007-08-10 ch 1, | abuseGod, I loved this. (: |
| LightYourPath 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abuseI admit, the rant in your profile got to me, haha. It's so true yet I'm fully guilty of it. :p Kellen was a fun character, a bit too "feminine" I sometimes felt, but that last scene *hem hem* made me like him even more. Take charge! Haha. And him thinking Mickey Mouse was in Universal *laughs some more* The whole roller-coaster-is-going-to-kill-you is what really drew me in though. Very original. You did a fantastic job of giving a twist to it at the end with "My life ended, but I got a better one" or something along that line :) Andre... hehe. I have a thing for boys with accents ;) Hot, hot, hot. Though I did find it odd that he was alone? when he was getting on the roller coaster. Unless he ditched his friends for Kellen. And him "convincing" the guy to let him go made me lol. Agh, it's been a long review, but I don't feel like I've said anything substantial. Bottom line: I really enjoyed your story and look forward to reading "Blind Yourself" :) |
| bleepbloopbanana 2007-08-07 ch 1, | abuse'Gay guys look more wimpy, like…well, like me, actually. Oh my god, did I really just think that?' Favorite line. Great story. *cookie* |
| dot-sye 2007-08-07 ch 1, | abusei liked it ^^ i'd actually like to read more on it too ^^ these two characters seem cool ^^ |
| xanthofile 2007-08-06 ch 1, | abusei think i died too. you made andre french! YES! *pumps fist* and you know what's sad? i've been making new dolls, recently. maybe i'll have this contest again sometime. lol this really was cute and sappy, and i adored it. amindaya...you rock forever and ever. |