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Otseis Ragnarok 2007-08-07 ch 1,	abuseYeah, it was kinda obvious that this was made for school... A lot of those big words seemed incongruous to say the least. Especially "Propitious". Using a vocab word in a quote NEVER seems realistic. Otherwise, that wasn't really all that bad.
MidnyghtVampyrezz 2007-08-07 ch 1,	abuseWow! That was so good! Hey, you know, instead of "roger" you can also say "wilco" which is "will comply". If you wanted to use that instead—"spice things up" a bit. As it were. Really good!