I am en expert in Djinn (Arabic word for genie) Culture. I kind of like this story. Write on, and if you need help, feel free to read my story, Chris and Maridia.

I'm liking the originality of this story, but not liking how much it really reminds me of Aladdin- mostly because the genie's name is Jasmine and because you intentionally threw in Aladdin references. I can't really say much for the story, seeing as there are only two chapters, but I am interested to see where it goes. I would, however, recommend a quick revision of the two chapters before continuing, as there are a few obvious spelling errors.

Wow, this is a refreshing change from the high school cliche fics that Fictionpress has been getting run over with nowadays. Your writing style is straightforward and to the point, and the interest comes from the story itself, which I find interesting. Not much plot as of yet, but I'm liking it so far. Hope you continue to keep it fast-paced and in character. *cookie*